Nice! The only thing that would make this even better would be to write the actual words around the circle: Pale white and black with dalse citrine, imperfect white and red. The peacock's feathers in bright colors, the rainbow in the sky above. The spotted panther, the green lion, the crow's beak blue as lead. These shall appear before you in perfect white, and many others... LOL, I memorized it. That's sad... LOL, great job!

Great job. I really like the coloring. You did a really good job on the circle... A lot better then the one that I did. Keep up the good job. ^_^